When writing a
RECOUNT, you are advised to use
Past Tense forms for
verbs to refer to the passed events. Here is a sample of a composition on
recount. All bolded words are written in
past tense forms.
A Trip to the National Park
Recent school holidays, the Environment Club of my school
had organized a trip to the National Park in Pahang. There were forty students
joined the three-day trip and they
were chaperoned by six teachers.
We
assembled (gathered) at school as early as 6.30 in the morning and
left for Pahang a few minutes after a short briefing by the teacher in-charge. We
chartered a bus from Ipoh to Pahang and we
reached the National Park exactly at noon. Once we
reached the reserved forest (National Park), we
checked in our chalets and
unpacked our stuff. We
had a short rest and shower before lunch.
Right after lunch, we
went to the Orang Asli settlement which
was located nearby. We
took a ride on a big boat and it
took us about twenty minutes to get to (reach) the village (settlement). The ride
was quite alarming (worrying) for the current was wavy and wild. Luckily, we
reached the village safe and sound although parts of our attire
were soaked. We
were warmly
welcomed by the Chief and we
enjoyed the three-hour visit personally. We
were amazed by the Orang Asli’s authentic culture. We
returned to our chalet before twilight (dusk) and
cleaned up ourselves before we
had our dinner around 9.
On the following (next) day, we
started our next expedition to a limestone cave which
was located only a stone throw away from our chalet. We
departed (left) as early as 7 o’clock and we
were guided by two forest rangers. We
learnt about the ecosystem of the cave and there
were lots of information we
gained (got) from the sightseeing (exploration) as well as the briefing given by the rangers. We
spent about three hours in the cave and it
was almost noon when we
came out of it.
It
was amazing to witness such a beauty in the virgin forest especially when there
was a cool and refreshing waterfall beside the cave. We
had our lunch cum (together with) picnic over there. We
swam happily like there would be no tomorrow although the water
was quite freezing. Exactly at 2 o’clock in the afternoon, we
began our jungle trekking activity. Guided by again, the dedicated rangers, this adventurous activity really
taught us abundance of lessons. We not only
learnt about the species of rare wildlife but we also
learnt about survival skills in the forest. We were grateful to have such a forest that
was rich with unique and rare species of flora and fauna.
There
were lots of information and experience
gained through this activity. It
was funny to know that there were many things that I
had ignored and cared less about. This expedition
had taught us that there
were many more things that we know less about, as the saying goes ‘the more you learn, the more you don’t know’.
This adventurous activity however
ended before dusk. It
was pretty tiring but it
was absolutely a tremendous activity we
had ever
had. At night, we
threw a barbeque dinner and
had a wonderful moment. On the third day right after breakfast, we
packed our stuff and
cleaned up the chalet before we
left home. Before leaving, the rangers
gave some souvenirs to be taken home. The three-day stay at the National Park really
left a memorable moment in our hearts.
The Simple Past Tense
The simple past tense is used to talk about past actions or events. It is used in
active voice; where the SUBJECT / DOER is at the beginning of the sentence.
Here are some examples extracted from the above recount:
We assembled at school as early as 6.30 in the morning.
- We is the subject/doer of the sentence. "We" does the action 'assembled'. Certainly, there should be no other verbs between we and assembled.
Once we reached the National Park, we checked in our chalets and unpacked our stuff.
- The word once is an adverbial (decoration), not a subject. It does not affect the subject/doer at all.
- We is the subject/doer of the sentence. 'We' does the action 'reached', 'checked in' and 'unpacked' as for 'once', it does nothing but to make the sentence longer.
Right after lunch, we went to the Orang Asli settlement which was located nearby.
- The phrase 'right after lunch' is an adverbial (decoration), not a subject. It is functioning to refer to time.
- We is the subject/doer of the sentence. 'We' does the action 'went'.
On the following (next) day, we started our next expedition to a limestone cave which was located only a stone throw away from our chalet.
- The phrase 'on the following day' is an adverbial (decoration), not a subject. It does not affect the subject/doer at all.
- We is the subject/doer of the sentence. ''We' does the action 'started'.
The Past Perfect Tense
The past perfect tense is used to refer to actions or events that have been completed in the past. The formula is
had + past participle. Here are some examples extracted from the above recount:
Recent school holidays, the Environment Club of my school had organized a trip to the National Park in Pahang.
The phrase had organized in this sentence shows that the action (of the trip) has been completed.
- If the word 'had' is not put, the sentence is still meaningful but lack of compassion.
The expedition had taught us .......
- The phrase had taught in this sentence shows that the action (of teaching) has been completed.
- If the word 'had' is not put, the sentence is still meaningful but it is very plain.
The Passive Voice
The passive voice is referring
to the sentence in which, the doer is put at the end of the sentence or maybe the doer is not mentioned at all in the sentence. The formula to form passive voice correctly is by putting
was + past participle or
were + past participle before the doer (if any). Here are some examples extracted from the above recount and two other sentences:
There were forty students joined the three-day trip and they were chaperoned by six teachers.
- In this sentence, six teachers are supposed to do the action 'chaperoned', not the students. But since 'six teachers' are put at the end of the sentence, it seems like the teachers are no longer the subject.
- It is true BUT still, the teachers are actually doing the action in the sentence. Hence, auxiliary verb 'were' must be put before the verb 'chaperoned' to show that 'they' in the sentence is only an object, not the subject.
Right after lunch, we went to the Orang Asli settlement was located nearby.
- In active voice, the above sentence should be written as "There was an Orang Asli Settlement nearby. We went there right after lunch."
- But the active voice suggested is quite nerdy.
- Anyhow, passive voice really puts some colours into your writing.
The girls were kidnapped on their way home.
- In the above sentence, somebody kidnaps the girls but that 'somebody' is not mentioned in the sentence.
- From the sentence, we know that the girls do not kidnap but they are the victims of the kidnapper.
Surya's brother was caught by the police for shoplifting.
- Clearly the sentence is passive because the word 'by' is the clue.
- In the sentence above, the police caught Surya's brother for shoplifting. But Surya's brother was put at the beginning at the sentence although he is not the doer.
- The doer in this sentence is the police but is put after the verb was mentioned.